The Loved One

The Loved One

1 chapter / 916 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

*FOR THE SOULBOUND CONTEST*
One girl. Two boys. Who will she chose?\
NOTE: The theme was for the contest was to write about a love triangle, soo please (i'm begging you!!!!!) say the love triangle thing is a bit cliche. Trust me, I know. :)

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over 4 years ago Elainia said:

I loved it! So original! Congrats on the home page and great work!

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over 4 years ago Aviline said:

Amazing! Congrats on being on the homepage for: April 23!

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over 4 years ago Deegan Miller said:

This is a enchanting story. I really like how you wrote this. Please write more!

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over 4 years ago Connor Morris said:

I really enjoyed this story, and I was wondering if I could get feedback on some of my stories. Thank you so much, and keep up your good work!

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over 5 years ago Brittany Washington said:

It's very interesting. I like the twist on the love triangle cliche with the supernaturalness. I want to know more about what is going on with the faeries and the war. And how all these creatures fit together. Overall good job!

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over 5 years ago Alicia KC said:

This piece was interesting. It definitely stood out to me. Your love triangle was hashed out well but, alike to other comments, does have that Twilightish feel to it. However, that was your choice and I respect that. Personally, I'd like a little more plot development. You speak of a war, fairies, angels, and the two shifters; it's a little disorienting in that sense. It's just mythical overload. I think you should slow it down a little and give a little background to the story to help readers understand what's happening /JustASuggestion. Otherwise, the story was well written~ Best of luck with the contest!