In MahPance

In MahPance

1 chapter / 999 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

A cowboy sits on a toilet and is transported to a strange universe. Will he get out? Find out!

If you want me to continue this story after the contest is over please tell me. (I say this because several people have asked)

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about 1 year ago Alexandr Lukin said:

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over 4 years ago c said:

Hearted! If you would like to swap please read/heart my story “Ella and Sam were here.” Thanks!

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over 4 years ago c said:

Hearted! If you would like to swap please read/heart my story “Ella and Sam were here.” Thanks!

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about 5 years ago Ashlyn Helligso said:

This story was funny and well written, i loved it.

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about 5 years ago Michael Miller said:

interesting story. It has a fast pace, sometimes a little too fast to follow. The cowboy's unique expressions and turns of phrase give the story a distinct tone, though they overused a little, and distract from the main story. These minor flaws aside, mahPance is an interesting story, and a continuation could be very interesting.

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about 5 years ago Andrea Smile said:

Great humor, strange concept, excellent twist! Well done! Continue after the contest! ;)