Neglected and Abandoned

Neglected and Abandoned

11 chapters / 3171 words

Approximately 16 minutes to read

Description:

Clover hates Bone. Bone likes Hazel. Now Bone likes Clover. And Clover likes Bone.

The drama of your neighborhood cats.

Comments(13)

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over 6 years ago Fern said:

OOOH REALLY????? WHAT SECTION WAS IT IN?

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over 6 years ago Anon Y. Mouse said:

i want to hear so much moe!!! please! i saw this on the handpicked figs thingy...yeah :) congratss on being a handpicked fig!! please continue.

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over 6 years ago Anon Y. Mouse said:

wait...warriors?

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over 6 years ago Mahogany Grey said:

Cute cover! :)

Reviews(2)

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over 6 years ago Fern said:

Thanks for the advice! I went through my whole story and corrected and edited some information.

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over 6 years ago Milan . said:

Hm. I have mixed feelings on this piece. As Casey said, I can see the Erin Hunter influence. Although it's not a piece of Fanfiction, maybe you want to give her some credit?

Also. Um... housecats do hunt. My cat, who is, yes, a housecat, brings back a dead bird/chipmunk every so often. So does my neighbor's. So... you can't really say they don't hunt. You also say you gave the tabby (at the end of the first chapter) scars on her face. This sounds a little odd... maybe say deep cuts. Or something.

Keep writing!

-Pippa