1 chapter / 587 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read


I won't give them what they want. They've been wrong to me too many times.



over 3 years ago Nova Sigmen said:

Sorry for the late swap.It was a very cool story to read. Really liked the perspective.


over 3 years ago S. E. Cates said:

That was a really well done character interaction.

Me and king 2

over 3 years ago Tori Lutz said:

Woah, AWESOME ending!! This entry deserves a lot more attention, really good job!


over 3 years ago Kaitlyn Elizabeth said:

Same contest, woo!! Okay, on to some actual feedback... I like what you have here. It's a decent take to the prompt and you do it well. I admit that sometimes it doesn't seem incredibly realistic, but perhaps that's just me. And also, you might want to put in a more unique first sentence. But the rest is wonderful. Nice job and best of luck in the contest!


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over 3 years ago ♥Soleil♥ said:

I liked this. Pretty intense! I had no idea it was maddie. Wow. I want more!!


over 3 years ago Irina T. said:

Thanks for the review, but it says why He didn't want to say anything but no in the story!