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I won't give them what they want. They've been wrong to me too many times.
10 months ago Nova Sigmen said:
Sorry for the late swap.It was a very cool story to read. Really liked the perspective.
10 months ago Madame Notte said:
I like the cliff hanger at the end, but my favorite part was the dialogue. All of the 'no's' made me laugh. In my head, I kept picturing a stubborn little girl. Good stuff. :)
10 months ago S. E. Cates said:
That was a really well done character interaction.
10 months ago Tori Lutz said:
Woah, AWESOME ending!! This entry deserves a lot more attention, really good job!
10 months ago ♥Sunflower♥ said:
I liked this. Pretty intense! I had no idea it was maddie. Wow. I want more!!
10 months ago Irina T. said:
Thanks for the review, but it says why He didn't want to say anything but no in the story!