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I won't give them what they want. They've been wrong to me too many times.
about 4 years ago Nova Sigmen said:
Sorry for the late swap.It was a very cool story to read. Really liked the perspective.
about 4 years ago S. E. Cates said:
That was a really well done character interaction.
about 4 years ago Tori Lutz said:
Woah, AWESOME ending!! This entry deserves a lot more attention, really good job!
about 4 years ago Kaitlyn Elizabeth said:
Same contest, woo!! Okay, on to some actual feedback... I like what you have here. It's a decent take to the prompt and you do it well. I admit that sometimes it doesn't seem incredibly realistic, but perhaps that's just me. And also, you might want to put in a more unique first sentence. But the rest is wonderful. Nice job and best of luck in the contest!
about 4 years ago ♥Soleil♥ said:
I liked this. Pretty intense! I had no idea it was maddie. Wow. I want more!!
about 4 years ago Irina T. said:
Thanks for the review, but it says why He didn't want to say anything but no in the story!