Alpha's Call

Alpha's Call

3 chapters / 1930 words

Approximately 10 minutes to read

Description:

This is gonna be put on hold ;A; cause I realized after the previous author chat that I don't really know anything about actual gangs so.

Genres:

Writing, Action, Novel

Comments(12)

Dscf0052

over 5 years ago Brianna Drummond said:

I really like this. I had a lot of sympathy for the MC and she had inspiring motives. Keep writing!

Lost memory story main character

over 5 years ago Yowlot said:

This is a great start for a great story and I really like it so far. So please, please keep writing! :)

Echosmith

over 5 years ago Keira Casanova Hale said:

Wow, awesome story!

Img_6985e

over 5 years ago Amy Schmitt said:

This is a really cool story! I enjoyed the gang concept very much and the writing was very good.

Good job!

Reviews(1)

Gothic person

over 5 years ago AllGloryIsFleeting said:

So, this story is, well, amazing. I love everything about it so far, and it is really clear on the ideas and characters.

You really should continue this, because it has a ton of potential and it really shines from all the stories I read, constantly.

Some things I would suggest: Since this is just the beginning, there isn't a lot of material to work with. I would suggest, later in the story, some sort of meltdown between Ruly and her parents. They are the fuel for the sadness in the reader, and the reader would be delighted to know that she overcame them.

Besides that, I have nothing bad to say about this. Keep writing! ~AGIF