Gold E. Locke and the Three Beers

Gold E. Locke and the Three Beers

1 chapter / 1492 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read

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Full Title: The Completely True, Not At All Made-up Story of Gold E. Locke and the Three Beers. The title is pretty much the description. Short story based on the fairytale Goldilocks and the Three Bears.

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over 5 years ago Nove Payne said:

Hahaha, I loved this! It was a really funny take on the Goldilocks story, and I loved how you gave the story more "adult" humor. The beginning was great as well--your voice as a narrator is funny and a little sarcastic, and reminded me a bit of Holden. I didn't see any mistakes either, so great job there! Keep writing!

-Keely

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over 5 years ago Kathryn E Czarnecki said:

I LOVE how you wrote this and then tied in other fairy tales

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over 5 years ago Liliana Lee Lovell said:

heh heh this is hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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over 5 years ago The Great Toepick said:

The hearts and stuff are from The Ultimate Contest Group, just so you know...

This was very clever and sounded well thought out. The narrator was very blunt and had a lot of character. Overall a very good piece of writing. :D :D :D

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almost 5 years ago Sarah Jiang said:

I loved this! I like how you tied it to other fairy tales and made it funny without completely straying from the plot. Your writing is amazing and although I spotted a grammar mistake somewhere in the middle of the story, it's mostly all right and I'm sure it was probably just a typo considering the perfection of the rest of it. You should definitely write more like this, I absolutely adored it!

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over 5 years ago Mallory Finch said:

i really like the twist. it was unusual and unexpected. very well written. great job :)