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What happens when the lights go out?
almost 4 years ago Pixie Dust said:
Not really my cup of tea, but it was well written!
over 4 years ago Saleena Nival said:
Thats crazy! I think this is a good outline for a great story. I feel like you need to add some details. When I was reading it I understood what was happening, but I didnt fully get the shivering and wasnt as scared as the text should have made me because of the slight lack of details. Continue working on it!
over 4 years ago Alex M. Stache said:
(swap for Don't Let Them Win)
You creeped me out, and your cover didn't really help me. This was really good, I wish you luck on your goal.
over 4 years ago Kathryn Marie said:
That is just creepy. I love the story! But creepy! Maybe you should expand it though? I love the story and yes it does need some more description but hey its still pretty good! Good luck on your 75 heart goal!
over 4 years ago Alena Galindo said:
This is the thrill everyone has been waiting for. I'm very eager to read it when it's finished. It gives just the right amount of horror suspense and unanswered questions to form the eagerness to try to see if there is an answer that ties everything together in the story that ends with no loose ends.
over 4 years ago The Anomaly said:
This made me cry and shiver. It was really descriptive of how the girl came out of the painting and it was really sad that Kennedey had that happen to her. Good Job!!!