Modern Day Alice

Modern Day Alice

3 chapters / 1195 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

Description:

The story of a girl who's obsessed with Alice in Wonderland. She's a real mystery to everyone in her high school.

Comments(27)

Converse

over 3 years ago Abigayle Mullins said:

Are you going to publish anymore on here?

Converse

almost 4 years ago Abigayle Mullins said:

I love it, can't wait till you write more! :)

Drumsticks

over 6 years ago Olivia Thrasher said:

THis was really good, but you are a bit repetitive. At one point you talk about the house being photographed and you say, "In a few weeks the house will be photographed by a famous newspaper tomorrow" just thought you might wanna clean that one up.

Glassesnstuff

over 6 years ago Meg Moore said:

It's a cute take on a classic story, interesting.

Reviews(8)

Chesh

over 4 years ago Olivia C.H. Atter said:

Great plot idea and good setting. The grammar and and word choice/phrasing needs a little help though...proofread the story and then have someone peer edit it, it would make the writing much more fluent. Overall, good job! I love Alice in Wonderland!

Charlie2

about 6 years ago Sarah Helene said:

This is very abstract and cool! I like how Blair is so obsessed with Alice in Wonderland. It'll be interesting to see if Blair's Wonderland is the same as Alice's, or if it's become more modern (like Tron and Tron Legacy... ). I love Drew's character. It's fun to see how each part of Blair's life is in sync with Alice's. I'm really looking forward to meeting the Mad Hatter! Keep the great work up!