I think I love you

I think I love you

8 chapters / 7440 words

Approximately 37 minutes to read

Description:

(WORKING PROGRESS.)
A contemporary love story that spreads over the course ten years about a bad boy and a good girl. From knowing and not knowing how to love, to not-so-good surprises, to other significant others, to high school, college, and the work-place... these two can't seem to get out of each other's way. Coincidence? I think not.

Genres:

Comedy, Drama, Romance

Comments(71)

Midnightowolf2

over 2 years ago MidnightOWolf said:

Please tell me when you update this.

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over 2 years ago Eloise Maybelle said:

Chapter 1:

Nice starting quote! Though I am not a huge fan of TS. Anywho, I think you have a nice start here. It felt a bit rushed and a little more telling than showing, but overall I really did like the personalities you gave the characters and I think Jay is a really cute name ;) So good choice with naming your characters!

Blobo

over 2 years ago cormac cremean said:

I'll be honest I'm a dude and I like this strange but I think it's well done (this is coming from someone who plays fallout constantly and enjoys brutally killing legion) anyways I read a lot of romance on figment just like seeing people hook up and fall in love I guess. anyways I would totally be willing to do a nswap for this chapter for chapter love it.

Carriiiieeeeee

over 2 years ago AceandPenny31083 said:

I read the first couple chapters and loved it. Your character names fit so well and your details made it flow really well. Odette is a really cute character and her and Simone compliment each other so nicely. Wonderful work! I'll try to finish it when I can because I really liked what I read so far!!

Reviews(5)

Midnightowolf2

over 2 years ago MidnightOWolf said:

Wow. Just, wow! :)

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almost 5 years ago Wallflower (Faith) said:

I think...I think I like him..

Well I should say so, Simone xD

"I probably look like some sort of nutjob waving her hand in mid-air." You described this perfectly XD

Your dialogue was pretty realistic, and the plot was good...but there were problems. Whatever happened to dear old David after she kissed him? (or, he kissed her...) Why is the nurse not in the nurse's office to keep kiddies from...making out? And what exactly is Simone's deal? Is she just a big pessimist? These things weren't really clear.

Other than that, great job!

"What are we doing?" "Whatever we want." and a smirk...that was absolutely perfect for Jay xD

Keep at it!

-Faith ;)