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The life of a pair of siamese twins... AMAZING cover made by Riley Wagner.
over 3 years ago Aria said:
Wow this is amazing!
I hope you continue writing. This is extremely interesting and I want to know more! Your writing style is just brilliant.
over 3 years ago Aurora Sanders said:
Hi- I was just working on the story you commented on 2 months ago and decided to look at your story. This is really interesting and well written, and I feel bad for the twins. Please continue!
almost 4 years ago Maia Sowers said:
So cute!!! I loved it!! Very unique and creative! Great job! Keep writing!
almost 4 years ago Stephanie McKinley said:
This is a nice story so far. I like that I learned a lot about each of the twins. This is a unique idea that is not written about much, so I think you could have something here if you keep it up. Happy writing!
almost 4 years ago T. M. Wolfe said:
You've got something going here, that's for sure! I've never read anything about Siamese twins before, so that's pretty original. Just a few things though:
grammar and misspellings.
You gave me the impression that they somehow hide Lea? Or maybe when they go to school, you should have at least one person be mean to them. It's just more realistic. Sadly, there's always a mean girl.
But it's a good start!
almost 4 years ago Towns said:
I think it's really interesting! I javen't read anything that tackled this subject before. I love the idea. It has a lot of potential to become even better, too. Keep writing, I look forward to see what happens next ^-^