Doors

Doors

17 chapters / 12466 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

After a rough senior year, Blaire Caroline Swenson is more than ready for a fresh start at college. But after an unexpected turn of events, Blaire finds herself back in a mess that she'd thought she'd escaped a long time ago.

Genres:

Novel, Mystery, Romance

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Comments(28)

Milan london

over 4 years ago mena london said:

This was really really good. You did a great job with the feeling of it!

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almost 5 years ago Desiree Roberts said:

Would love if you wanted to swap!! And if you do please say so! I give great reviews :) My story is a paranormal romance! Please help me out-- The Devil Will Cry, is the name. xoxox!

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almost 5 years ago Lizzy Montgomery said:

This is amazing! Very well written and good plot. Keep writing!

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almost 5 years ago Lizzy Montgomery said:

This is amazing! Very well written and good plot. Keep writing!

Reviews(16)

Violets!

over 4 years ago writersblock101 said:

I really liked this! I read the first two chapters, and thought they were very well written. Blaire is an interesting and relatable character, and I think you convey her emotions well. The only error I found was in the prologue you wrote "Mr.s." instead of "Mrs." Nice work! :)

Piv

over 4 years ago Elizabeth said:

I only read the first five chapters, but I think you have a great story here! It was hard for me to find any mistakes, you were pretty good about everything, but I'll try my best to tell you what I thought.

What I liked: I really loved how you ended each chapter with "another door closed", or "another door opens". That was really creative, kudos for that :) It was also a good idea to add the newspaper clippings, as it adds much more depth to the story. You also have really great descriptions, and the dialogue was just fine. Your characterization was also good, and I actually kind of liked Narissa more than the MC for a moment. You can really tell how much Blaire hates Narissa, you almost went overboard with that, but I think that's fine right now.

What I would change: Oh, there's not really anything I would change except that it does get a bit confusing at some points. But that's okay with me, honestly your story is fantastic and definitely one I'll be coming back to to finish. Excellent work!

~Violet