Death Toll Rising

Death Toll Rising

1 chapter / 1191 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

Description:

On the search for a volatile serial killer, Selene and her ex-rival Halden find themselves in a complicated situation after angering a revenge-prone Faerie. Their problem? They've been sent to a part of the world where their inherent Magick is on lockdown. [A break-off of a novel-in-progress] "Hearts" appreciated as this is a competition piece, but only if you like it!

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over 4 years ago LaLaLove507 said:

Amazing! I can't wait to read more of this! Have you published any more chapters? You had me hooked. :D

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over 4 years ago M. Smith said:

Very nice job! I thought your descriptions were nicely detailed and I love your wide vocabulary. It did get a little confusing at parts, and I wished you had set apart a section where you explain exactly what is going on when the story starts. Also, I think it would be better if you didn't use "The Mage" and "Halden" interchangeably, just because that got a little confusing as well. But other than that, I thought this was such a great beginning. I hope you continue with this after the contest!

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almost 5 years ago Zea Pturin said:

Wow, I love this! You totally had me hooked, nice work! Please write more!

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almost 5 years ago S.C. Arlet said:

This story is AWESOME! Love the tension, and intensity (and also the humor)! You’ve got a great voice and writing style. No wonder you chose that as your major! :)

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