Madeleina's Castle

Madeleina's Castle

1 chapter / 1192 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

Description:

Madeleina is an orphan but she isn't an ordinary one, as Lilly soon finds out. Lilly begins to wonder if maybe there is something more to life than the orphanage.
*cover courtesy of ledernierjour*
*Goal, 100 hearts*

Written for the Throne of Glass contest.

Comments(40)

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over 2 years ago z.flebar said:

I am soooooooooooooooooooooo sorry it took so long for me to read this. It was really great; I loved the characters. At the end though, it seems more like the end of a chapter than a short story, so maybe when your done with the contest you could continue it, or maybe have a more ending type feeling to it.

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over 2 years ago Faith Mellark said:

This is amazing! It is beautifully written, and seemed really effortless. If that makes any sense. It flows really well, and good luck in the contest! :D

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over 2 years ago Ash S.H. said:

***EXTREMELY late swap return (SORRY!)***

Ooh! I'm the seventieth heart :D

I loved this. It was beautifully written, flowed wonderfully and you really told an intricate story. Incredible, incredible work. :D I love your cover, too! And Madeleina... that name is gorgeous ;)

Good luck in the contest!

~Ash

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over 2 years ago Jessie R. H. said:

This is very much amazing. The theme was cool. I also really enjoyed the conversations, but the chapters sometimes lingered to long. But it was still great. Loved it.

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over 2 years ago Emma said:

This is very good and well written story. I thought the storyline was great and good how you let elements of mystery allowing the reader to create their own answers based on whats written.

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over 2 years ago Meagan Silverwolf said:

Very well written. Just watch little mistakes. One question; why does she do what she does? Why does she follow Madeliena? Why does she believe her?