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Approximately 6 minutes to read
Madeleina is an orphan but she isn't an ordinary one, as Lilly soon finds out. Lilly begins to wonder if maybe there is something more to life than the orphanage.
*cover courtesy of ledernierjour*
*Goal, 100 hearts*
Written for the Throne of Glass contest.
9 months ago z.flebar said:
I am soooooooooooooooooooooo sorry it took so long for me to read this. It was really great; I loved the characters. At the end though, it seems more like the end of a chapter than a short story, so maybe when your done with the contest you could continue it, or maybe have a more ending type feeling to it.
9 months ago Faith Mellark said:
This is amazing! It is beautifully written, and seemed really effortless. If that makes any sense. It flows really well, and good luck in the contest! :D
9 months ago Ash S.H. said:
***EXTREMELY late swap return (SORRY!)***
Ooh! I'm the seventieth heart :D
I loved this. It was beautifully written, flowed wonderfully and you really told an intricate story. Incredible, incredible work. :D I love your cover, too! And Madeleina... that name is gorgeous ;)
Good luck in the contest!
9 months ago Jessie R. H. said:
This is very much amazing. The theme was cool. I also really enjoyed the conversations, but the chapters sometimes lingered to long. But it was still great. Loved it.
9 months ago Emma said:
This is very good and well written story. I thought the storyline was great and good how you let elements of mystery allowing the reader to create their own answers based on whats written.
9 months ago Meagan Silverwolf said:
Very well written. Just watch little mistakes. One question; why does she do what she does? Why does she follow Madeliena? Why does she believe her?