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Madeleina's Castle
1 chapter / 1192 words
Approximately 6 minutes to read
Description:
Madeleina is an orphan but she isn't an ordinary one, as Lilly soon finds out. Lilly begins to wonder if maybe there is something more to life than the orphanage.
*cover courtesy of ledernierjour*
*Goal, 100 hearts*
Written for the Throne of Glass contest.
Comments(46)
9 months ago z.flebar said:
I am soooooooooooooooooooooo sorry it took so long for me to read this. It was really great; I loved the characters. At the end though, it seems more like the end of a chapter than a short story, so maybe when your done with the contest you could continue it, or maybe have a more ending type feeling to it.
9 months ago Faith Mellark said:
This is amazing! It is beautifully written, and seemed really effortless. If that makes any sense. It flows really well, and good luck in the contest! :D
9 months ago Ash S.H. said:
***EXTREMELY late swap return (SORRY!)***
Ooh! I'm the seventieth heart :D
I loved this. It was beautifully written, flowed wonderfully and you really told an intricate story. Incredible, incredible work. :D I love your cover, too! And Madeleina... that name is gorgeous ;)
Good luck in the contest!
~Ash
9 months ago Jessie R. H. said:
This is very much amazing. The theme was cool. I also really enjoyed the conversations, but the chapters sometimes lingered to long. But it was still great. Loved it.
Reviews(14)
9 months ago Emma said:
This is very good and well written story. I thought the storyline was great and good how you let elements of mystery allowing the reader to create their own answers based on whats written.
9 months ago Meagan Silverwolf said:
Very well written. Just watch little mistakes. One question; why does she do what she does? Why does she follow Madeliena? Why does she believe her?