Every Rose Has Its Thorns

Every Rose Has Its Thorns

1 chapter / 156 words

Approximately less than a minute to read

Genres:

Drama, Poetry, Romance

Comments(8)

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over 4 years ago Violet Essence said:

Aww. There's a dream-like quality to this. Very sad. But I really enjoyed it. Great job!

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about 5 years ago Keira Casanova Hale said:

Very sad, meaningful, and unique. This was a great piece of work!

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about 5 years ago Laina O'Shields said:

That was kinda sad.. but well done.

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about 5 years ago Rachel Elkin said:

I love the idea behind this poem and how it isn't a typical love poem. You added your own unique sort of flavor to it. However, I think you could work a little bit on the flow. The lines didn't really flow together for me, but I loved everything else!

-Rachel

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about 5 years ago Jennifer Mobley said:

I like the mood you created but the words you chose at the endings kinda ruined the flow of the poem :) maybe try to choose some other words... other than that I like it :) and the cover