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11 chapters / 18173 words

Approximately about 2 hours to read

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*18.2% Completed*

[The Allie Taylor Series #1]

*SECOND DRAFT IN PROGRESS* *READ FIRST DRAFT HERE.*

Small town girl, Alexandria Marie Taylor(Allie Taylor), enters a whirlwind singer/songwriter competition. Suddenly the whole world knows her face, and she's flying on a high of dreams come true. But will she be able to take the fame as well as the hoard of drama that comes with it, or will she crack under it?

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*FEATURED ON THE HOMEPAGE 2/14/13*

*Prequel to Inside of Me*

Cover by one of my ever so lovely best friends, S.J. Bouquet. Trailer by Aurora Sanders.

Genres:

Drama, Novel, Romance
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Comments(488)

Bjed9901

about 3 years ago William Carter said:

Alright, by no means am I an expert at music, so please keep that in mind as I'm reading through this. I really like your characters. I really like the personality of Ruthie, and I like Aaron as well. Although, I do feel Allie seems to act less of her age than she actually is, with the whining and everything. But I know every family is different, so that's not really important. One thing I am wondering is this: if Allie sang in minor competitions before, then wouldn't she have known the things her friends suggested to her at the end of the chapter? I'm no music expert, but I felt I knew those things even though I've never been taught how to sing. Just an observation, that's all. Other than those things, I felt this was pretty good. It's not my favorite genre, but at least I can read it (unlike a lot of Figment writings).

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over 3 years ago C said:

*Proceeds to bang head against wall* ALLIE TAYLOR, YOU WILL STEP AWAY FROM THAT PERVERTED JERK!!! Like Aerin said, YOU WANT A GUY WHO'LL RESPECT YOU, AND LIAM IS NOT THAT GUY!! Sam needs to come and save the day before Allie gets harassed by Liam... Hurry, Sam!

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over 3 years ago Aurora Sanders said:

*slaps Liam* You pervert!

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over 3 years ago Jo said:

Mr. Confusing! Stop playing with my head!

Have you heard phelpsy's version on youtube?? It's really good, it made meh happeh! And now I have it stuck in my head....

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Hunter_thompson_modok_by_schmaltz

over 3 years ago Samuel Jickels said:

So I liked the start of the prologue and how it was kind of dreamy with Allie looking out of the window at the passing view. You used "kinda" at one point when it was not in dialogue which should be changed to kind of because without it being said by a person you should always say things the correct way when describing emotions or setting. Take out "some months later" at the start of chapter 1 because really 8 years later a a fast forward time period is fine. You seemed to repeat yourself with actions quite a lot like "kissing on forehead" and "rolled eyes" this kind of makes it repetitive so I advise to change them up to something else. After reading the first two chapters I started to actually dislike Allie, I felt she was kind of a brat, spoilt and bitchy. Maybe make her a bit more likable at the start so the reader finds it easier to create and attachment with the MC. Also you said " walked out like a normal person" that kind of sounds odd in my opinion. How does a 'normal' person walk? Also the dad at one point said "stay my Allie" I think it should be "stay As my Allie". Hope this helped.

Hunter_thompson_modok_by_schmaltz

over 3 years ago Samuel Jickels said:

So I liked the start of the prologue and how it was kind of dreamy with Allie looking out of the window at the passing view. You used "kinda" at one point when it was not in dialogue which should be changed to kind of because without it being said by a person you should always say things the correct way when describing emotions or setting. Take out "some months later" at the start of chapter 1 because really 8 years later a a fast forward time period is fine. You seemed to repeat yourself with actions quite a lot like "kissing on forehead" and "rolled eyes" this kind of makes it repetitive so I advise to change them up to something else. After reading the first two chapters I started to actually dislike Allie, I felt she was kind of a brat, spoilt and bitchy. Maybe make her a bit more likable at the start so the reader finds it easier to create and attachment with the MC. Also you said " walked out like a normal person" that kind of sounds odd in my opinion. How does a 'normal' person walk? Also the dad at one point said "stay my Allie" I think it should be "stay As my Allie". Hope this helped.