Tormented Soul

Tormented Soul

1 chapter / 3950 words

Approximately 20 minutes to read

Description:

©2012 Aria goes to her grandmother's for the summer under her mother's orders. The first night isn't exactly a peace-filled, bingo playing good time...

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over 4 years ago Gabriela Q. said:

Ugh!!! I can't leave a comment on your wall so I just had to do it here!!! Peru was good :) And was your house damaged from hurricane sandy?

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over 4 years ago gegesuffy :p said:

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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over 4 years ago vghdthdth said:

Great imagery, well written, and i loved how the dialog is in it... most stories i read on here dont have that. awesome story line, loved the ending! :)

thankyou for reading my poem :D

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over 4 years ago Nicole Jones said:

Sorry.I was about to comment.this story is awesome.i loved al the details and dialog you put in it.Great job

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over 4 years ago Scarlett Rosalie Mikaelson said:

Needs a better hook, but other than that it was just amazing, I loved reading it, and look forward to reading more.

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over 4 years ago Katie Nester said:

*Reads. Gasps. Smiles. Shreiks. Cries. Weeps. Wipes tears and gives standing ovation.* BRAVO!!!! This was wonderful. It could use some work with the hooking in part and some creative detail changes but wow... just wow. I applaud you. Keep up the good work and write the rest. I look forward to reading it.