Darkness Everlasting

Darkness Everlasting

3 chapters / 1638 words

Approximately 8 minutes to read

Description:

I'm not currently posting anymore on this story. I've been too busy to work on the big stuff. Thank you to those who have read this and hearted it and all who have commented/reviewed on it because you've helped me out A LOT.
~Nimue

Comments(9)

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almost 5 years ago A Girl That Writes said:

i really love this. i love how you started off with a quote, which fit the story well. the beginning was really beautiful, something quote worthy :) great job on this and i hope you conitnue with this soon! :)

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about 5 years ago Genevieve Motyl said:

Sorry for how long it has taken me to get back to you!

This is great! Absolutely intriguing and gripping! The detail and raw emotion that you use make the scenes come to life! I felt so connected with your characters and their emotions. Honestly, I just loved it all! I wanted to keep reading so bad, but, ah, your 3rd chapter is locked! I hope you do continue so that I may! Great work!

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over 5 years ago V.ROSE said:

Whoa, I really like this. I can see this going somewhere. So keep it up!

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over 5 years ago A Girl That Writes said:

wow this story is really intriguing. your writing has a lot of suspense in it and i really like your writing :) great job on this and i hope you continue soon! :D

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over 5 years ago Danielle Palumbo said:

-You seem to change tense with “sent shivers..” should be sends maybe? I have to say that I like your real life parts better then the dream. I think that the dream part is a little choppy. I would just work on your flow and you need to be careful of your tenses! Otherwise this was a really great story! Good luck.

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over 5 years ago ~ Momo ~ said:

I like the way you show the characters emotions and also how you describe everything, it is amazingly awesome and I want you too write more so I can read more:)