The night goes on...

The night goes on...

3 chapters / 6666 words

Approximately 33 minutes to read

Description:

(IN PROGRESS)
Reayn is bombraded with the aftermath of 'The Ripper' case as it continues without a single lead.
At the same time, her past time memories start to haunt her further into as she digs deeper. And the more she runs away, the more they seem to crawl out and embrace her from every direction.
And Lyle doesn't seem to be his usual self, as the mystery of the case deepens... so does he with his suspicious actions...
And the night goes on...

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Special thanks to Tyanna Snider for the Book Cover.
She's a genius and got talent!
Thanks yous

Comments(8)

Me

almost 6 years ago Jenna Faccenda said:

Your detailing was really good. I love mystery stories so you had me hooked from the grip. I can't wait to read more from it!

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about 5 years ago Theresa Rose said:

Wow!! I thought this was amazingly written!! and I love mystery!!! Your detailing and descriptions were very good and I like your style of writting. Over all and amazing story!!!! Great job!!

Amor

about 5 years ago DeathFlower93 said:

Wow, the way you wrote it was just stunning! I really like this so far, keep it up. :)

Cutecat

about 5 years ago Leafwing said:

Beautiful detail in the story. I was a little confused to what was happening, but I did get it eventually. I know it's a little nitpicky, but I thought there were some unnecessary ellipses; it was a little distracting. Otherwise, I loved the storyline and how you structured the chapters, and I could see the characters in my head because of the detail. Nice job!

Reviews(1)

March 2

about 5 years ago Sam Ogozalek said:

I must say, this was a classic mystery story, I extremely enjoyed it! A few things I might improve in the sentence structures, but overall the details were gritty, and incredibly descriptive, you painted a great picture in my head!

Overall, a incredible story, I could easily see you writing a set of short stories or such, in the mystery genre, for a magazine!