A Hundred Secrets Ago

A Hundred Secrets Ago

1 chapter / 3752 words

Approximately 19 minutes to read


Odette is lured into an abandoned Russian palace by Dimitri, but when she arrives, she is greeted by a masquerade ball and secrets from a hundred years ago. Odette will finally uncover the secrets that haunt the palace as the spirits of long ago let their story unfold, but will she live to tell the tale?



over 5 years ago Cait Cher said:

Oh, wow, this made me shiver a lot. I love the detailing you put into this.


over 5 years ago Raven said:

So sorry I'm getting to this so late....it was amazing, simply amazing. I loved your detail and confusing qualities which played out quite nicely. The characters were good, the setting perfect, and the writing style and word choice great. I loved it!


over 5 years ago ExcuseMyFrench said:

Wow you caught me off guard with the vampire thing! At first I was like Huh? Then I was like :O WHOA! And then I was like OMG super amazing writing! Love it!

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over 5 years ago Sally Balboa said:

Only critique is that you not have your first paragraph so long.



over 5 years ago Chris Nicholson said:

Whoa, that was chillingly enthralling! I absolutely loved the abundances of descriptiveness it was brimming with a beautiful grandeur! I love your style its so...so enticing! I don't even have any criticism to give to you, I loved this! I'd hate to be Ms. Mitchell! I've read a myriad of beautifully crafted entries that it be impossible for me to choose a winner. I am so glad that we're doing this swap! I do enjoy reading well-written and gorgeously crafted pieces such as yours! I hope you have a pleasant night, Ms LalaLove!

Keep writing, Chris