Cassie can't remember her family, or her name, or anything beyond waking up in a stainless steel room, but she hears things others can't and knows things she shouldn't.
This was my attempt at a NaNoWriMo '10 piece. I did not hit the 50k goal (le sob), but I still liked the story, so... FIGMENT'D.
I can't even explain how much I love this story. I was captivated right from the beginning and it remained that way the whole way through. This story is just absolute genius.
Fantastic story and amazing writing, I really can't wait to read more. I'm new to this site and am so glad this was the first story I found and decided to read.
I was intrigued from the first paragraph and captivated after the first chapter. It made me feel for Cassie straight away and I already hope she gets out. I am completely intrigued about what's going to happen next.
Excellent work, well done!
Your writing is effing fantastic. It's so well crafted and the voice here is so strong. Your characters feel like real, breathing people, not just things on a page. Bravo. :)
Comments(191)
about 1 month ago StormySkies said:
Beautiful.
4 months ago Erin Morrissey Gillman said:
This story is brilliant, are you going to write more?:)
4 months ago Katja Lemermeyer said:
I can't even explain how much I love this story. I was captivated right from the beginning and it remained that way the whole way through. This story is just absolute genius.
5 months ago Amelie said:
Oh. My. Gosh. I was hooked right from the beginning! I love it! :D
Reviews(33)
about 1 month ago Kirsty Wallace said:
Fantastic story and amazing writing, I really can't wait to read more. I'm new to this site and am so glad this was the first story I found and decided to read. I was intrigued from the first paragraph and captivated after the first chapter. It made me feel for Cassie straight away and I already hope she gets out. I am completely intrigued about what's going to happen next. Excellent work, well done!
about 1 month ago RachelWrites007 said:
Your writing is effing fantastic. It's so well crafted and the voice here is so strong. Your characters feel like real, breathing people, not just things on a page. Bravo. :)