Thoughtful

Thoughtful

7 chapters / 9343 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

Cassie can't remember her family, or her name, or anything beyond waking up in a stainless steel room, but she hears things others can't and knows things she shouldn't.

This was my attempt at a NaNoWriMo '10 piece. I did not hit the 50k goal (le sob), but I still liked the story, so... FIGMENT'D.

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Comments(182)

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about 1 year ago Kate Scherzinger said:

It's such an interesting idea and I love Cassie. This is amazing, really, and it would really be great if you wrote more!

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about 1 year ago meg said:

Brilliant. Will there be any more?

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over 1 year ago StormySkies said:

Beautiful.

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over 1 year ago Erin Gillman said:

This story is brilliant, are you going to write more?:)

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over 1 year ago Kirsty Wallace said:

Fantastic story and amazing writing, I really can't wait to read more. I'm new to this site and am so glad this was the first story I found and decided to read. I was intrigued from the first paragraph and captivated after the first chapter. It made me feel for Cassie straight away and I already hope she gets out. I am completely intrigued about what's going to happen next. Excellent work, well done!

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over 1 year ago RachelWrites007 said:

Your writing is effing fantastic. It's so well crafted and the voice here is so strong. Your characters feel like real, breathing people, not just things on a page. Bravo. :)