Thoughtful

Thoughtful

7 chapters / 9343 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

Cassie can't remember her family, or her name, or anything beyond waking up in a stainless steel room, but she hears things others can't and knows things she shouldn't.

This was my attempt at a NaNoWriMo '10 piece. I did not hit the 50k goal (le sob), but I still liked the story, so... FIGMENT'D.

Cover image source: http://www.flickr.com/photos/gi/445569722/in/photostream/

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about 7 years ago Marisa said:

I read the first chapter, and this is really interesting. I loved your opening! Usually the openings are hard, but yours was really grabbing.

The prose was strong with the sensory imagery. I love it, you can really sense the fear and confusion.

This is so intriguing, I know I'll be back for more. Oh, and your little description at the beginning was great as well, it's the reason I wanted to read it in the first place. From what I've read, well done :)

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about 7 years ago Mina Rose said:

I'm addicted. I literally checked to see if you updated this story at least once per hour. I'm so confused, usually I hate this feeling, but I'm trying to figure out what's happening to her. I literally CAN'T WAIT for the whole thing to be done. Also, I really enjoy evil doctor characters that act really nice, so you're not sure if they are a villain or a good guy. If this was a book, I would buy it immediately. Reminds me of The Hunger Games, but totally different.