The Improbable Unlikely Suspect

The Improbable Unlikely Suspect

1 chapter / 590 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

For the Who Done It? contest! Although it's improbable that this author could be an unlikely suspect, she swears she didn't murder her mean editor, Herman Mildew. Who believes her?

Genres:

Comedy, Drama, Mystery

Comments(7)

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about 5 years ago Rel95 said:

lol very funny take on this prompt. The voice you wrote it in was great! Wonderful job!

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about 5 years ago Rachel Elkin said:

Definitely has a great, humorous voice. The tone is very light-hearted for the subject and honestly not too believeable. I also felt like a lot of information about the MC was thrown at you and I would have liked a more intense twist on the story. However, it still has some great, funny parts. Overall, nice job and good luck.

-Rachel

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about 5 years ago Elaine Harlington said:

Funny, but a little bit too much like all the other entries. About never killing anything and then going on about dead insects that were victims of the MC's "killings." Try something unique and you might get further in the contest. It was well-written though.

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about 5 years ago Kira Martin said:

Lol, I loved the humor in this! The voice is great. I love the part about the edited and non edited version when Herman yells.

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