Heartsick

Heartsick

1 chapter / 109 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

When your heart aches...

Genres:

Writing, Romance, Poetry

Comments(4)

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about 5 years ago Laina O'Shields said:

Ugh... boy oh boy can i relate to this piece. It's sad, but also sweet.

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about 5 years ago Zea Pturin said:

Aw, this was so sad! But, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! Your descriptions were well done. I love the choppiness of the piece, it gives it an interesting feel when reading. Nice work!

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about 5 years ago Molly Butler said:

I liked the ending and concept, I just wish that you had taken a little more time with the word choice. I think with some differences in word choice, it would be a REALLY fantastic poem. Just a suggestion, I do like the emotion behind it and the flow of the poem!

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about 5 years ago V.ROSE said:

This was done very well and excellent. =)

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