The Endless War

The Endless War

3 chapters / 2324 words

Approximately 12 minutes to read

Description:

(*Practice*) A girl fights for her survival through this war of planes, bombs, Skybirds etc. She is alone, her mom died from a bomb and ther dad was MIA. Her brother might of died. This may be the end for the USA. This is the borderline of humanity. This is the Endless War.

Genres:

Action, Fantasy, Mystery

Comments(15)

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about 5 years ago horsecrazy said:

I don't like these stories, but yours was pretty good.

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about 5 years ago Ginger Alexandra said:

This is awesome! I love your amazing style of writing! Good job! ;)

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about 5 years ago Julia said:

Oh my gosh, you have a very unique style of writing!! Just becareful of your verb tenses and more improved dialogue, then you'll be fine! Love the fantastic idea! Write more!

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about 5 years ago wild ones said:

Thanks!!! ♥♥ :D

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about 5 years ago Lucy Marie said:

I'm sorry, I would love so much to read your piece because it sounds so interesting, but I couldn't even get through half of the prologue. :/ If you go into your piece and edit the dialogue, so that when a new/different characters speaks you put it on another paragraph. Until then, I'm sorry, but I just can't. I hope I'm not coming across as mean because that's not my intention here. :) From what I've read with her waking up, I'm really intrigued what's happened and the caring relationship between the siblings. Fix and I will come back, happy to swap.

Let me know on my wall please.

~Lucy

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about 5 years ago Bijan Moore said:

Wow! What can I say... THIS WAS AWESOME! The action is intense and gets the story going fast, which I like. Your details made me picture everything clearly in my head and I felt as if I was actually there. The cover is cool and creepy (in a good way lol). Please continue this, cuz I wanna read more! Keep Writing! -Bijan