Come Back

Come Back

1 chapter / 150 words

Approximately less than a minute to read

Description:

You'd think that when your sister leaves the country, something would happen.

Prompt: In 150 words or less, write a scene where someone loses a loved one in an instant.

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about 5 years ago Beth said:

The emotion in this is so real and tangible, and even though you said very little about the situation it was not at all confusing. However, there are a few sentences that did not quite make sense - and I'd recommend maybe checking it over for that? I really love this, though. I like your writing style a lot.

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