The Secret Brother

The Secret Brother

1 chapter / 321 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

WORK IN PROGRESS!!!!!
This is a story about Jaylin Clark, a nineteen year old who is in need of a sibling and a job. So when his brother calls him and tells him to meet him he had to go. Then his brother offers him a job. He accepts. Probably wasn't a good idea. But now he is already a part of it and he can't leave. Find what happens.
P.S. The story is still in progress here is the Prologue though.
Enjoy :D

Genres:

Action, Adventure, Drama

Comments(3)

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over 3 years ago Jessica Nielsen said:

this is really good I can feel the anxiety of the main character

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over 4 years ago Jennifer said:

Lemar, wow! That was incredibly well written. A nice drama was unfolding there. Definitely pursue writing and any other passions you may have! Phanomanal job! If you get the chance, check out how Anna handles the Newtown shooting on Dec. 14, 2012 in my story "Little Angels of Connecticut." It could use a few hearts, too, if you're willing. I'll definitely be hearting yours. Keep up the good work! :)

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over 4 years ago Jon Epic said:

I can't wait until you're finished with it, it's gonna be amazing!!!!

Reviews(1)

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over 4 years ago Avvari said:

Awsome! Your a good writer! I like the voice and the cliff hanger is a killer! Just a quick note: the jump was a bit dramatic. You actually can't survive a jump off a three story building with one of those hangings. But hey, it sounds awsome. Just warning you for realisims sake. I can't wait for more!! (Heads up, I read this instead of the seventeen mag. entery because I'm not swaping for those. I've already read wya to many and it's not my genre, sorry. If your to tick to answer I understand, but if not, then pleas read through my descriptions and pick one of my writings to read. Prose are mostly second page. My stuff's long, so if you only read part of something I understand. Thanks for asking though, I love your writing style and can't wait for more of this one!)