Breaking Pace

Breaking Pace

1 chapter / 4536 words

Approximately 23 minutes to read

Description:

This was for an english assignment i did during my freshman year of high school. We had to write a true narrative essay, and I made mine about track and field. Its about a compitition that i did a couple years ago that i thought was important to me. I didn't win it or anything- it's just a story showing how important a competition can be for track athletes. I thought I would post it because there doesn't seem to be enough writing about the art of track and field. Yes, racing is an art.

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over 1 year ago Celina Cooke said:

This is, by far, the most amazing book I have ever read! Better than Percy Jackson! Better than Harry Potter! Better than every book in the world! No book, can beat this! I really love running, and I am glad that someone finally came to their senses and wrote about it! Keep up the great work Scorpio Ryder! I am following you! Click! There! Justice delivered!

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over 2 years ago Autumn Wren said:

I loved this! As a track athlete myself (60m, 100m, 200m), I loved reading about the sport! There aren't many stories on it. Great job!

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over 2 years ago Sue Hong said:

This is great! except for a couple type-o's like apartment is written as arpartment and best friends instead of best friend's.

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over 2 years ago Rosa Parks said:

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12 months ago Sylvia Whitt said:

I really love your essay! It was so descriptive that it felt as if I was there. When you were anxious, I felt anxious too!

One thing you could work on is I saw some small grammatical errors. Also you could use more specific words when describing certain things, it's not fun to here the same words over and over again.

Overall I think this was a great piece of writing!

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about 2 years ago yo moms closet said:

._. why did I even click this when i dont like sports