Sacrifice

Sacrifice

4 chapters / 293 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

Description:

I know that happiness is temporary, I know it's dangerous to love. So...shall I just rip my heart out now, or let it be picked away at piece by piece?

Comments(9)

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almost 5 years ago Armelle Dejoie said:

Wow. This was really touching.

I wasn't -still am- not sure If this is a fictional piece or not. Like GL said, the emotions are raw.

The only problem I have is at the end. You said something like "tear myself apart at piece by piece" At in this sense is unnecessary and I feel that it took away some magic in the ending.

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almost 5 years ago GL said:

I liked the raw emotion in this, and I thought the way you chose to write this was every intersting and creative.

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almost 5 years ago Julia said:

Really loved the format, feeling, and emotion expressed throughout this story! Amazing!

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almost 5 years ago J.A.D. Lumanta said:

Amazing story! I loved how you cut it into small chunks so that the reader can absorb and digest them more fully! I enjoyed soaking up the story and the message this way! I also love your writing style! Overall, well done! :))))))

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