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Approximately 6 minutes to read
*Mature language in here*
Daniella is your average ordinary celebrity teen. Watch as she battles paparazzi, juggles annoying directors, puts up with spot light stealing costars, and has romance.
over 4 years ago Hermione PG Mason said:
I like the idea. However, it was a bit rushed. Overall, nice!
over 4 years ago ❄️orEOcookie99❄️ said:
Nice job as homepage! I think you should a bit more time on feelings, descriptions and emotions, instead of just dialouge and action. Slow the story down a little. But I love your story idea!
over 4 years ago Aviline said:
This is so cool! Great idea! Congrats on being on the homepage.
over 4 years ago Jade Leigh said:
i loved this! it was good!
if its not too much to ask... could you read three of mine and give feedback? they are called... sad goodbye... killing me.... and... perfect him.... thx so much!!
about 5 years ago Aly Cole said:
I really love the idea that you have here, and I already care about the characters. However, there are two problems I've found. First off, your grammar and language. Grammar is an easy fix, just have someone read it over and underline things that they had to stop and think about for a minute. However, language is something else. It's how words flow, its the individual words you use. I would just recommend going back and combing through, taking more time to edit. Just by the idea, its easy to see that you're a talented writer. Just stick with it-I know this story hasn't been updated in awhile, but please start it again!
Amazing, amazing job!
over 5 years ago Abigail said:
The plot is SUPER creative and you tell the story in a very casual, comforting, easy-to-read manner. It's really good and I will totally be coming back for more! -Abigail