Doomed to Die

Doomed to Die

1 chapter / 483 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

What would be your thoughts if you knew you were going to die?

Genres:

Writing, Short Story

Comments(11)

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over 4 years ago Chantel Dildy said:

This was really good and made me shiver at times. I really would love to see more work from you. Keep on writing!

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over 4 years ago Kayy said:

Whoah. I really loved this, especially the ending. Good job!

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over 4 years ago Emi B said:

This was really good, I was hooked from the beginning and you really delivered at the end. Great job. The only thing I didn't like was the title and just the line "Doomed to die." Doomed is to condemned to death/destruction. If it's a person it's usually used as death. So, it's like saying condemned to die to death. idk, it could be fine, it's just my opinion that there are so many other ways to say it. Destined to die. Unavoidable death. Oh snap they gonna' kills me! :)

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over 4 years ago DeathFlower93 said:

Hmm, interesting, but a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes, that's all. I have those too! Good. :)

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