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Approximately 4 minutes to read
She's survived a near-fatal accident, and now she's part machine...
*Winner of the Steampunk Contest!* I had to write a story involving the Narrika device dreamed up by Fiona Plunkett :)
*Cover Credit: I made the design with brushes by Nela Dunato, from www.inobscuro.com
2 months ago Billie Leshay Espinosa Horan said:
I loved it, just wish there was more. Great job!
3 months ago Maria Jackson said:
Great job - you're descriptions of both Travis and "the belt" were fantastic and immersed me right into the story.
3 months ago Ashley <3 said:
I'm not sure if you will ever get around to reading my comment, but I loved it,and can't wait to read more of it, I was also wondering if you had any time do you think you could take a quick look at mine?
3 months ago Astrid Hartman said:
This was awesome!! The suspense is killing me at what happens next! The detail was really good and of course your story had that wonderful flow, all your stories seem to have that. Congrats on winning the contest even though it was like 2 years ago but that's still exciting :) what did you win? -Astrid
4 months ago Hannah Haglund said:
You are amazing a writing short stories! I loved it! In a way, the story reminds me of "The Lady Or The Tiger" and how the audience decides how it ends. :) a work of art! you are VERY talented.
4 months ago Luna paris said:
this so sweet but i want to know what else happens!! its terrific
and it really flows *note* please read some of my book too