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[Prose: FINISHED]
**FEATURED AS EDITOR'S CHOICE ON MARCH 12, 2013**

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about 16 hours ago Jess said:

This was beautiful.

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2 months ago Matthew Thomas said:

You are a talented writer. Very descriptive, and very unique idea! I was right there the whole time, and was hooked with the first sentence. Keep up the good work!

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2 months ago Alecia Walls said:

I loved this I really think you did an amazing job

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3 months ago TK Walker said:

I absolutely enjoyed this!

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17 days ago Mariella Baird said:

You have a talent for what my old english teacher used to call the show, not tell rule. Rather than instruct the reader to feel a certain way, you instead paint pictures in their mind so that they understand exactly how to feel. Exceptional.

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4 months ago C.P. Halladay said:

A wonderfully unique story. The abnormal stylistic choices with regards to syntax contribute tremendously the overall appeal of such a beautifully developed idea. This work, using less words than so many others, passionately conveys so much more.