Faith in a Claus

Faith in a Claus

4 chapters / 4073 words

Approximately 20 minutes to read


At the Palmer Sunshine Center, all of the kids believe in Santa Claus. All except Charley Newman, whose lack of faith stirs up a controversy so big that not even nap time will be able to calm everyone down. -----------------

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over 3 years ago The Writing Rose (original) said:

You always know how to write the character to life in my mind. Beautiful.


over 3 years ago Kaitie Lysaght said:

This is really great! Especially since I have at places similar to this. I like how this gets into the politics of child behavior. Things not only we see in children as adults but what we've experienced an remember. Hilarious too. Hoping for last chapter. :D


over 4 years ago Emmy Grace said:

Wow I love how everything has such a serious tone even though its a daycare


almost 5 years ago Audrey Enters said:

You know exactly how a kid thinks. What a great story!



about 5 years ago Joshua "LF" Mitchell said:

Very clever piece. I like where it's going. :P Little kids are TOTALLY like this! I did notice a minor typo when you mention that "this is a children's book after all." The "is" inbetween "this" and a" is missing.

Other than that, this is an excellent piece so far, and I'll definitely be back on the 28th to read more. :D