Poison Lips

Poison Lips

7 chapters / 6802 words

Approximately 34 minutes to read

Description:

A girl who has special powers has a prejudice against men but learns how to love once again.

Genres:

Fantasy, Horror

Comments(23)

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almost 5 years ago Simone Tilmon said:

Lol im glad figment has a continue button :) btw Hades is a turd (nt liking him at all) lol

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almost 5 years ago P. A. Phoenix said:

Great, I love the female character... very bold! Keep me posted :) xx

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almost 5 years ago P. A. Phoenix said:

Still interesting! I liked that last bit; I love your characters. Keep me updated, luv xx

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almost 5 years ago Mae Asare said:

This was amazing! It was really creative,(I loved the Greek mythology) and you had some really vivid images. You're really talented :)

Reviews(1)

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about 5 years ago Rowley said:

I really enjoyed this piece! It was very original and I liked your dialogue. The only problems were easily solved grammar errors and a few awkward sentences. The biggest problem I thought was the first sentence. The end didn't flow. Perhaps "tousling my hair" would work better.