Waiting

Waiting

1 chapter / 1071 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

~Story~ So, this is based on a true story, and the first story I've written in awhile. I know it's rough, especially when the dialogue starts. I'll probably edit it a bit, but any suggestions you have are welcomed. Thanks!

Genres:

Writing, Memoir, Romance

Comments(8)

Paris

over 4 years ago Emily Drew said:

This has really strong emotions in it. I like it. Your writing flows well and tells a beautiful story. The descriptions are especially great. Nice work! :)

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over 4 years ago ➳FollowYourArrow ♥ said:

You have a strong way with words, this was fantastic!

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almost 5 years ago Lexi said:

This was very cute and your writing is great. It's strong and is well-written. I really, really hope you will expand on this later as I enjoyed reading this and made me smile! Have a nice day and happy writing! :D

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almost 5 years ago A Girl That Writes said:

i thought this was really cute :) your writing is really strong and i loved the emotion you put into this. great job on this and i hope you continue with it soon! :)

Reviews(1)

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over 4 years ago Bebe Guillet said:

Hi, I really enjoyed reading this. It was relatable, realistic and the way you described the emotions was great. The only thing is, I'm a little curious to know why you wrote "so last night, _________ texted me." Why did you put "________" instead of a name?