The Window To Fantasy

The Window To Fantasy

1 chapter / 468 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

A children's tale.

Genres:

Writing, Fantasy

Comments(5)

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almost 5 years ago Mackenzie Kelley said:

Lovely, beautiful, fantastic job.

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almost 5 years ago Si Jia said:

I love it so much! I really enjoyed the plot and it was pretty creative. I didn't see many grammatical issues. Nice tone, style, and diction. Great job and keep it up!

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almost 5 years ago J.A.D. Lumanta said:

Beautiful writing! Bravo!

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almost 5 years ago Danielle DiBona said:

The flow was a bit off, but I liked the story. Like Calypso said, it lacked detail. Other than that, good job! :D

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almost 5 years ago Ruby Skye said:

This was magical! It pulled me in. It did lack some detail, but that may have been an attempt to get inside the young characters head. You are clearly a skilled writer with promising talent and I look forward to reading more of your work. Excellent work!