Harmony

Harmony

1 chapter / 579 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

I am not the type of burglar you would expect. I don't steal anything.

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over 4 years ago ❄️orEOcookie99❄️ said:

Awwww this story is so sweet. I love the idea of a thief that comes in and doesn't steal anything and really like the message of harmony that you're trying to deliver. Nice message :).

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over 4 years ago M.H. said:

This was a brilliant piece. It's so sweet, and really is clever. I just adore the way you've written this because it flows so well and has such a wonderful message. x3 Amazing work.

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over 4 years ago Louise Diment said:

I really liked this! I love how you took a typically criminal job and turned it into a job of a peacemaker. Your descriptions were good too, I actually felt like I was there with your character. This is very original, so well done!

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over 4 years ago Laura said:

Wow! This was a brilliant and inspirational piece! I was genuinely moved and I was inspired to make a different in other peoples' lives. I completely agree with all of your statements, especially that we all have to live in harmony. You somehow found a way to make this piece sound effortless and flawless, so props to you!

The only mistakes that I found were the following (you can change them if you'd like) 1.That’s the way they were made. 2. I do not know what happens to my paper people once I leave them.

Other than that, I was impressed. Keep up the good work!

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