Strings

Strings

1 chapter / 496 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Alexis finds herself in one of her dreams but this time it's real. He wants her and she can't wake up to escape this time.

Comments(6)

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over 4 years ago Patty Pimperstin said:

Hearted yours! If you want to swap, please check out "The Springtime Sacrifice" on my page & heart it if you like it! :)

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over 4 years ago c said:

Hearted! If you would like to swap please read/heart my story “Ella and Sam were here.” Thanks!

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over 4 years ago Maya said:

This was really cute (near the end). The story kept my so attracted to it! I was really amazed with the ending ending the way it did. Perfect!

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almost 5 years ago Secret Author said:

Read and hearted =]. I'm a newbie to the site so I've just been getting back on commenting to follow-up on previously read entries. If you would, please check out "Straightaway" on my page and if you like it, heart it! If not, well that's okay. haha =]

Reviews(1)

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over 4 years ago Alexa Valle said:

Hello! :)

I love the concept of your story, but there are a few things that are a little confusing. I understand the word limit, but I'm left wondering - who is this man? Why is she dreaming this, and why is it coming real now? What is he? A vampire? Magician? What does Alexis look like? Where are they? Why is this her worst nightmare?

The story has a lot of promise and it's a concept that I've never seen before, and for that I give you kudos. I just think there are a lot of opportunities for expanding and letting the reader know more about the characters and setting within the character-limit.