To Dream

To Dream

1 chapter / 496 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Dreams are made, given life, and then left to rot and wither. Don't let that happen--if you do, you'll hear the lost crying.

Genres:

Writing, Memoir

Comments(71)

Bjed9901

about 4 years ago William Carter said:

Man! This was so vivid as if it was a dream itself! Particularly, my favorite part was how the grass was greener on the other side, just a stone's throw away. :D

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over 4 years ago Anna Soong said:

The imagery is spot on! I love the part about the leaf... so beautiful. I wish you the best of luck!

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almost 5 years ago Rose said:

It seems I've already read this! It was still awesome!

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almost 5 years ago Amy Ong said:

This was so inspiring! The imagery was amazing, and by the time I got to the end, I felt empowered.

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Snowlepoard

over 4 years ago Erin Fincher said:

You are a really talented writer! I loved the imagery in this! Great job, keep writing, and good luck!

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almost 5 years ago Amanda Persico said:

I loved this, very poetic. Though, there was one word placement error that I noticed " maybe it gently put in their coat pocket like something precious and hurry home to show others." I think "it" should go after "put" it seems to flow better that way.

Keep on writing! ^_^