Beauty, Ugly.

Beauty, Ugly.

1 chapter / 495 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

if I win the seventeen.com contest, I will DONATE the ENTIRE prize to animals foundations/ stopping animal testings. That is a promise. please support me!!!

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11 days ago Emily Curtis said:

Isn't it sad that humans do this to animals? Very beautifully written, I can tell that there was a lot of heart put into it. :-)

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3 months ago Eve Harrison said:

Wow, this is incredible! Those poor animals!!!!! I'm a total animal rights person, and I love this soooo much! Keep writing, this is great! ~Eve:)

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8 months ago Rachel D. said:

I stumbled upon this, and I'm very glad I did. Nicely done, you are a brilliant writer!!!!

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12 months ago Lightningfrost said:

Very well written. You are a very good writer! :)

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5 months ago Violet Tomilson said:

I loved this! Animal rights is a huge issue, and you handled it very well. The writing kept me gripped, and the ending was great. One thing: after the "one hour earlier", maybe you should include an ellipses. (you know, ...) But other than that, great. Keep writing!

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5 months ago Mai Ashina said:

I really enjoy the idea behind this story, however I do agree with the person below me that it does seem as if you speed things up too much. I actually like the anonymous effect of not knowing the character's name, as many stories begin with the name and description of a character.

The plot is different and the subject matter is very touchy for many people so I think that you will find a very fiery audience with this. You build suspense very well and also the flashback from the very beginning didn't feel awkward or misplaced like many others that I have read.

All in all a very good start.

Happy writing and please continue,

Mai