Before That Day

Before That Day

4 chapters / 3631 words

Approximately 18 minutes to read

Description:

***READ AFTER YOU READ You Said Together Forever***A LOT of you guys who read 'You Said Together Forever' wanted me to continue this story, so I decided to write this; The prequel! This takes place before Shane died. Basically, this is how the two met and fell in love.

Genres:

Writing, Romance

Comments(10)

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over 4 years ago Nicole said:

I love that you are giving this to some very persistent readers :) I do agree with others that you could add a few more details! And I think you could change the way you are formatting this. I believe it would be better if you had the journal writing in bold form so you could get rid of the astrics in the writing. You do what you want! Oh, and please tell me when you add more :)

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over 4 years ago Krystal Fragoso said:

It was very sweet. I could feel the character's emotions throughout the story and I really enjoyed how it began. Great job!

Phantom

over 4 years ago Karolynn Crane said:

could you read Lights Out please, and if you have already ,will you read Wherever the Wind May Blow?

Pink

over 4 years ago Alea Moon said:

You could have added a bit more details. Other than that, I interested in reading more. Thumbs up :D

Reviews(2)

Northern-lights-caribou

almost 5 years ago Mirage said:

Awwww!!!! So sweet I love learning the story of when they first met :) This is well written and flows smoothly, great job!

Equality1

almost 5 years ago The Doctor in the TARDIS said:

I just finished You Said Together Forever, and so far, I really like this. Your usage of past and present is very well done, so kudos to that. Also, nice touch explaining how to read everything. Something like this could be very confusing.

I like the storyline so far; it should be interesting finding out how they fell in love. Keep writing, you have a gift!