The Springtime Sacrifice

The Springtime Sacrifice

1 chapter / 497 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Misty's job is quite simple. She just has to bring the gigantic and terrifying monster under the cemetery a human sacrifice to eat every spring. Quite simple indeed.

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almost 5 years ago Jennifer said:

Oh my goodnes, Patty! I think at the end of that, my eyes might have popped out. I love how that girl changed her mind at the end because I really didn't want to see that boy get killed. If you don't mind me asking, you wrote that you couldn't live without your Saviour. Who is your Saviour? If you think that is a weird question, check out my profile. Anyway, keep on writing! :)~Jen

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almost 5 years ago Kat King said:

Awww....How sad! The story is good. The characters present themselves well. The plot is a little twisted and I would have liked to hear more of the conversation between the two of them or to be at least a little less in her head and more of what happened after she threw herself in front of the beast. Good luck!:)

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almost 5 years ago Antowan Batts said:

I love the powerful theme of friendship. 10/10

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almost 5 years ago Daisy Martin said:

I read your story I like it nice job!!

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about 1 year ago Srye Fox said:

awww

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over 1 year ago Daniel Brodsky said:

well done i hope you will write chapter two