The Springtime Sacrifice

The Springtime Sacrifice

1 chapter / 497 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Misty's job is quite simple. She just has to bring the gigantic and terrifying monster under the cemetery a human sacrifice to eat every spring. Quite simple indeed.

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Comments(437)

Lora

almost 3 years ago Lora Palmer said:

Wow! I'm so impressed by how much imagery and character detail you managed to capture in such a short piece. At first, I imagined that this would take place in some other fantasy world, or maybe during medieval times, so I really liked the twist that this was a contemporary setting and that her companion was a boy she liked from school. A boy who wanted to take her to the movies. As awesome as it would be to see what happens next, I suspect this cliffie ended the story perfectly.

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about 3 years ago Sarah Huffman said:

What!! No! It cannot end like that! Wow.... That was amzing ..

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about 3 years ago Naleah Schmitz said:

wow sooooooo amazing!

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over 3 years ago Tarka Fayelock said:

This is wonderful and adorable! It amazes me how you are able to fit such wonderful characters and such a unique plot into such a short amount of space. I really admire people who have that ability. I was hooked from the beginning. Your style is wonderful! And the ending was beautiful, spooky, and heartbreaking all at the same time. Amazing job!

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about 3 years ago begin_to_end said:

I liked this. Both of the characters seemed very approachable, and I instantly connected. One of the best things I've read on Figment in a long time.

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about 3 years ago ShadowDreamTales said:

Short but extremely sweet. You amaze me. Less than 500 words and everything is detailed, addicting, and simply pure genius. I congratulate you on that. I wish I could do that but its not my skill. You my friend have an higher skill of placing something so big inside small spot. Awesome work on this. My favorite by far.