The Springtime Sacrifice

The Springtime Sacrifice

1 chapter / 497 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Misty's job is quite simple. She just has to bring the gigantic and terrifying monster under the cemetery a human sacrifice to eat every spring. Quite simple indeed.

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almost 4 years ago Dhawal said:

Misty's job. The end. It just made me happy. Larry and Misty will make a good couple I think!

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almost 4 years ago Ari Everdeen said:

Aweh, the ending was so sweet!

I'm going to start with things to improve on, stuff I didn't quite understand. And finish with what I liked.

Maybe work on the setting a little more next time. Was it cold? Was it a big cemetery? Just stuff like that.

I really loved the ending though, it was cute. But maybe it was a little too predictable, that she would sacrifice herself. She hardly knew Larry, and was about to kill him, then she decides to give her life to preserve his.

The writing was great. I liked your idea of the sisters having to feed the beast every four season's, it was very original. Keep up the good work!