Like I Promised

Like I Promised

1 chapter / 377 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Waking up in the middle of the road has Janie absolutely terrified.

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about 1 month ago Gracie Alwin said:

Didn't expect that.

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almost 3 years ago Rachel D. said:

Very unexpected ending, I like it a lot! I wish I could give out more hearts, because I certainly would for this masterpiece.

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almost 4 years ago Brynn Somerville said:

wow so unexpected just wow!

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over 4 years ago WritersParadise23 said:

Just connecting to my review: This song popped into my head and I thought it connected with the story.

Waking Up by 10 Years [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TMwFa0Tccbs[/url]

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about 3 years ago Nilla Krilla said:

I love this short-story. The suspense kept me very interested throughout the story. The use of imagery is very fundamental to the plot. I like how the excitement of the story builds up to something so unexpected. The mysterious ending left me wanting more. The only thing I did not like was that it started out kind of slowly. It made me feel excited, upset, confused and intrigued all at the same time. It is a very fascinating short-story and it is very well written.

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about 3 years ago Nilla Krilla said:

I love this short-story. The suspense kept me very interested throughout the story. The use of imagery is very fundamental to the plot. I like how the excitement of the story builds up to something so unexpected. The mysterious ending left me wanting more. The only thing I did not like was that it started out kind of slowly. It made me feel excited, upset, confused and intrigued all at the same time. It is a very fascinating short-story and it is very well written.