Loving Blood

Loving Blood

1 chapter / 629 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

When love goes too far and ruins family bonds. ***This story actually came from a dream I had not too long ago. It was so crazy and weird that I had to write it down somewhere so that I wouldn't forget it! In my dream it was a lot different though, it was SO harsh that I couldn't believe I dreamed of such a thing! It had a different ending with my mom. It was a lot worse, trust me. I didn't want to publish the original ending because I feel like it was so bad! The images are still stuck in my head! If I get a lot of requests for it though, I just might publish it.

Genres:

Writing, Drama, Romance

Comments(14)

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over 4 years ago Aviline said:

WOW! This is so amazing. It's a powerful piece with raw emotion. I love it!!! Continue!! Tell me when you continue!

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over 4 years ago Paige Johnson said:

Hyphen full figured. The start matches the cover well. Hyphen anything with shaped or length. Thoughts go in italics. Good detail but there could be more in terms of emotion and figurative language to delineate it. Great ending.

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over 4 years ago Patty Pimperstin said:

Hearted yours! If you want to swap, please check out "The Springtime Sacrifice" on my page & heart it if you like it! :)

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over 4 years ago Bri said:

Wow. Totally didn't see that coming. This is a very bold piece but it kept me interested the whole way through. This completely blew my mind. Good luck in the contest.

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over 4 years ago Randeletta Howson said:

Wow! This is a very raw, gritty and honest piece. It kept me guessing throughout and kept me entertained. Great Writing style and concept :D Wonderful :)

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over 4 years ago Autumn Pahkar said:

Ha ha. Thanks for that 'brutally honest'. Anways... I think that you were very brave in doing this topic. This topic isn't always an easy topic, but you have addressed it in such a manner, that I want to know more. But perhaps, it does not need more...