Forgetfulness and Gingersnaps

Forgetfulness and Gingersnaps

1 chapter / 1432 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read

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A story about a cooking guru who has to relearn her own trade after she wakes up from an amnesia-inducing coma. Enjoy!

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over 5 years ago Zea Pturin said:

cool! write more!

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over 5 years ago Narry is my life said:

nice plz finish it/makemoreeeee :)

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over 5 years ago AWESOMENESS!!! said:

Awww sweet! But how did she automatically know she had been out for a few weeks? and how could she walk just fine?

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over 5 years ago Maddi said:

omg that was so cool!!

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over 6 years ago divachiu said:

I think this is my favorite story!!!!!! It is lovely, and I also love how you write from Monica's perspective when she forgets! Please read my story, Once Upon a Math Problem and rate it with hearts! Tell me what you think! BTW Great Story!

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over 6 years ago Zoƫ Aiko said:

This is lovely. Both the beginning and the end are strong, with a lovely (albeit slightly predictable) last sentence. You use modern technology very uniquely in this piece, which I admire. My only advice to you would be to edit the parts where Monica is in the hospital; even the moments leading up to and during her accident are very strong, but this middle section seems to be the weakest link. Your writing seems a bit forced and too quick there, unlike the fluidity of the rest of the piece. But other than that, this is a really lovely and unique short story. Great, great job! :)