Beautiful Annabel

Beautiful Annabel

1 chapter / 1371 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read


Writing, Horror, Romance


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almost 4 years ago Sydney Lacroix said:

That was really good! I liked the characters, even though I haven't read Poe (and don't really want to) I thought it was nice, (well not really 'nice') and well-written.



over 4 years ago Carlos Ordaz said:

I really liked this. I love poe. I'm honoured to live in the same city as he did and I've visited his museum dozens of times. You did him justice with this creepy story.


over 4 years ago Rob said:

good job!


over 4 years ago Pixie Dust said:

Yay! I was the one hundredth heart! Anyway, this story is breathtaking!



about 4 years ago Alyssa Sanville said:

Woah! That was amazing! I loved the way you jumped back and forth between present and past. For some people, that's hard to do. They can't make the transition easily in a way that makes you realize there's a difference but that they relate. Great job. I also loved the way at the end you had Jasper quote Poe. That gave me shivers! Fantastic! This normally isn't something I'd pick up and read if it was just laying around but you made it something that I would want to read again and actually suggest to friends of mine to read.


over 4 years ago S.J. Bouquet said:

Your opening paragraph makes me think of Sherlock Holmes :) and oo! I love the name Jasper! You use "room" in two sentences back to back early on. I suggest using a synonym for one. ...and gosh, I would have fled from Jasper, so props to your MC for not backing out on him. Ahh! You used the Poe poem! I liked that a lot; it's one of my favorites. This story was interesting and their relationship seemed deep. I think you did a good job here :D