It Will Never Be the Same

It Will Never Be the Same

14 chapters / 8413 words

Approximately 42 minutes to read

Description:

Kyla and Devyn have been best friends since kindergarten, but when Kyla tells Devyn that she wants to be more than friends, he can't admit he feel the same way. Will the friendship survive or crumble? Will the fact that Devyn is in a serious accident the day after she tells him affect the friendship for good or bad?
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Genres:

Writing, Novel

Comments(13)

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over 4 years ago pratiksha priya said:

awesome!!!

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over 5 years ago Livia Gretchen said:

Sweet.

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about 6 years ago Vivian Thai said:

wow this was quite interesting. I really like how you do different POVs and it shows like what they are feeling and everything. this is a cute story. I think you could use a little bit more descriptions

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over 6 years ago Jaime Velasquez said:

Little confusing with the point of views and the accident was something i was not expecting but overall very good so far.

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about 6 years ago Joy Amore said:

First off, I loved how you kept the reader ins uspense by not telling them what the ‘accident’ was right out in the beginning. It kept me hooked and I kept reading to find out.

There are some minor grammatical errors which need fixing. Your lack of comma usage could easily fix many run on sentences. You also spelled Devyn’s name wrong in the first paragraph of the story. Consider taking out the ‘i.’ You should also indent when someone is speaking, it appears as one huge paragraph.

I love it when Devyn says, “we got stuck in the friend zone.” It was so cute! So keep going, this is such a cute story. I haven’t finished reading yet, but I l really like it!

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about 6 years ago Naomi S said:

I love this story...There were a few grammar/punctuation mistakes but most've them can be fixed by reading through your story line by line :)....please continue!!!! :)