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Approximately 7 minutes to read
The cover was made by Faraway Hana. I recommend her to anyone that wants a kick-ass cover.
almost 4 years ago Summer Kingston said:
It's a very sweet story. There are some missing punctuation and capitalization errors, but for the most part it's a good story. The beginning was slightly slow, just because it's just explaining the backstory, but after the dialogue begins, it moves at a much better pace.
almost 4 years ago Armon Thurmond said:
This is one of the sweetest stories I have ever read keep on writing! Swap me back on my story Decaying Flesh or Fallen
almost 4 years ago Mermaid Maddie said:
Wonderful, and very sweet. :)
almost 4 years ago Reina Kat said:
Are you going to continue writing this? If so, I'm gonna read more, because, this waas good. You had the hero, Cyrus, the Damsel, Tessie, and the villain, that short, brown haired kid. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS... Anyway keep up the good work!
over 3 years ago Jess The Espeon said:
This is a very sweet story :) I love how Cyrus stops the other boy from breaking in to protect her. The fight scene is slightly clipped, but a very good description I would be very happy if you read Spirit Pagoda on my page. Keep writing
almost 4 years ago Autumn Lorraine Falls said:
Bloody brilliant love